Monday, May 29, 2017

All Children Should Walk to School

                              All children should walk to school

At H.D.S some children walk to school but most come by car or bus. Lots of people believe that all students should walk to school. I agree that children should walk to school. Here are three expert opinions for the argument.

The Bedford Council says that if all children walk to school the air won’t be polluted by cars because it means less cars on the road. Many true articles have been written by experts supporting all children should walk to school. Therefore if all children walked to school the world would be a better place to live in because there will be less cars on the road and the air would be cleaner.

The University of Toronto says that children aren't getting enough exercise. Over time we have come to know that children can get exercise from walking to school because walking to school is exercising. Therefore, if all children walked to school children will get enough exercise.


We can be very, very sure that all children should walk to school. If all children walk to school the air would be cleaner because it means one less car on the road. Another reason is that children isn’t getting enough exercise so if children walk to school they will get enough exercise. Therefore I absolutely believe that all children should walk to school.

This week we have been using evidence to write arguments about why all children should walk to school.

1 comment:

  1. Ka pai Dafu, you are beginning to use persuasive language effectively! - MrsT

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