Thursday, April 6, 2017

Dad Description

I felt so excited when I strolled through the double doors. I was going to go swimming! The first thing I noticed was the long and twisty slide. I couldn’t wait to go sliding through as fast as a rocket. Then I stared at a small poster that talked about not playing in deep water that is past your chest. I wanted to slide on the slide so I asked Carol “When can I go on the Hydroslide”?  She said “ you can go there in your free time”.


  1. Dafu you write like you are the king of writing

  2. What a nice writing! I like the way you describe yourself as a rocket!

  3. This is a good description, although you din't really describe what you were doing there.